IELTS Writing Task 2 Band 7.5 Sample Essay (With Feedback)

IELTS Writing Task 2 Band 7.5 Sample Essay (With Feedback)

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  1. Excellent in-depth analysis of the script. I wonder whether this is marking slightly on the harsh side though.

    It's an overall 8.0 to 8.5 from me.

    TR 8.0 (although could be a 9.0) – this candidate covers all the requirements of the task and also presents, extends and supports their ideas. The reference to 'no unnecessary sentence' is not part of the public marking rubric.
    CC: 8.0
    LR: 8.0
    GRA: 8.0

    One thing that never fails to surprise is the expectation of someone to write a script like this, get all their ideas organised, remember their commas…all in 40 minutes (!)

    It's almost unachievable to score 9.0 (having sat the exam myself multiple times).

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  3. What an amazing 😊and informative😍 video for those students who want to get 7 or above in the IELTS writing test . Even i have learned alot more things like beware of minor mistakes in grammar like how to use correct punctuation . thanks alot mam and make more videos along with feedback it's really helpful for us.

  4. Georgina Bergero congratulations, well-done, you're good to go. Wish you resounding success in your real IELTS exams.

  5. Woaah woaah.. Detailed explanation for task 2.. Chris I think I have never seen teachers like you and like Micheal 🙌


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